Masane Amaha's Bio

[masane]

Character's Name: Masane Amaha

Character's Gender: Female

Character's Race: Japanese

Character's Alliance: Normal Human

Personality: Masane is very smart. She can read very fast and she's good at Grammar as well as math. "As Masane never went to a university her knowledge of various subjects are limited. But what she lacks in book smarts she more than makes up with street smarts, common sense and determination.

" Masane is a very nice person. She will hlp anyone when they need it. If someone is poor and has no home she will offer them shelter and food. She gives to many shelters and organizations in Tokyo.

Masane is very funny at times. When she makes jokes everyone laughs with her in a friendly way. " Guess what?" Chicken Butt"

Masane is out going. She loves to go anywhere in Tokyo. She loves to go shopping, Movies, and likes to eat at restaurants.

Masane is very Ambitious. She is very determined to do whatever she can to help people be safe and secure. She was very determined in school and at her job.

Masane is very protective of people and friends she loves. Such as Riko, Yuusuke Tozawa and Takayama. Riko is her daughter and she means the world to her. She knows that riko is her life. Yuusuke Tozawa is her noble friend and kept her secret. So masane values his friendship and she thinks he takes beautiful pictures. Takayama is her lover and Riko's dad and she feels she needs his support during times of struggle and heart ache. She loves him dearly and if anything happed to Riko she knows Takayama will always be there for her.

Character's Appearance: Masane possesses both brown hair and brown eyes as she prefers a comfortable-casual clothing, her outfit usually consists of blue jeans and a pretty blouse.



Sample of your RPGing style: Masane Survies the witchblade explosion. During the explosion at the last second the witchblade cracks and detaches off her wrist just enough so that Masane can take it off her wrist and then she jumps off Tokyo tower to saftey. She meets Riko and Mr. Takayama where they are standing and says to them "I'm Ok you guys" and walks home with both of them. Masane keeps working for Douji as a assitant. The witchblade eventually finds another host.

[Lin Minanino]

Lol since it always seems to work on LH, I'm going to try this method here~. <3

Character's Name: Masane Amaha
Character's Gender: Female

This is fine.

Character's Race: White

Well, yes technically she is white, but her race is Japanese~.

Character's Alliance: NSWF

Eh... NSWF was evil. Well, mostly anyway. On this site her alliance would just be "normal human", if taken directly from the list, okay~? (:

Personality: nice,funny,smart,outgoing,ambitious,and protective of friends and people she loves.

A good start! ^^ Firstly I'd say to make each of these into one sentence so that it looks better. (: But don't just write "She is (insert chosen adjective here)" because that's not necessarily better. Try looking here: [click] for help developing a character's personality. You can also look at other examples~. Like when I wrote up [Lin's personality], for instance, I wrote something she might say and then expanded upon that. Now you don't need to go into nearly as much detail as I did. A full paragraph (five-seven sentences) would be good. If you need more help pm me.

Character's Appearance: Brown hair, brown eyes,blue jeans,and a nice pretty blouse.

The text isn't really needed, but it's nice to have it there as well. (: You should write it more like this though, "Masane possesses both brown hair and brown eyes. As she prefers comfortable-casual clothing, her outfit usually consists of blue jeans and a pretty blouse." <---You can use this if you want or modify as needed. (:

Sample of your RPGing style: Masane Survies the witchblade explosion. During the explosion at the last second the witchblade cracks and detaches off her wrist just enough so that Masane can take it off her wrist and then she jumps off Tokyo tower to saftey. She meets Riko and Mr. Takayama where they are standing and says to them "I'm Ok you guys" and walks home with both of them. Masane keeps working for the NSWF as a assitant for Mr. Takayama. The witchblade eventually find another host. Her name is Suzaki Amane.

Ok... um... this would work, as a history if the spelling errors were fixed. But as it is an rp sample, I'd like to see you actually write as Masane. Hell, you can write as a different character if you would prefer, we just need to see how you write. If you need help pm me. Also, you can include this part if you want, but it should be labeled "Character History" instead. Finally, the last two sentences are wrong. Masane worked for Douji Group not the NSWF. And lastly Akirue Katori is the new host on this site. (:

[Lin Minanino]

Okay, well, I still notice some spelling and grammar errors, but it's much, much better! (: In the future please try to write in third person (i.e. "Masane turned to face him and smiled, a knowing look in her bright brown eyes.") rather than first as you are doing. But you'll get better as you practice writing so I'm not too worried about that~.

Also remember to use spell check when writing your posts up. If your computer doesn't do it automatically type them out in Microsoft Word first and then just copy and paste them onto the site. (^_^)

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